Violets Sing

Violets sing

in fragrance - your name

 

Their beauty enriched

by the blossom of your

smile

 

Scented illusions

float on soothing winds

carrying silent wishes

of love to my heart

 

And I sit in awe

of everything

that is you -

 

blooming before

my eyes

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is stunning, Will! I love the imagery and the beauty you have intertwined in this write. This is astounding. I could almost smell the blooming violets and love in this.

[willweb]

Thank you again Madalyn for this humbling review of my little poem. I am so very happy you liked this one today.

[Rita L. Sev]

Violets sing in fragrance... great imagery here, Will. This is a lovely poem!

[willweb]

Thank you so much again Rita.

[just Penny]

Why violets? An unusual association with romance, but they are quite fragrant I guess. Scented illusions and silent wishes are a good start ! All great things begin with a dream, so keep on dreaming ! A nice, short poem with sweet sentiments. I am behind in the read requests but hope to clear them in the next couple of days if I can :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Penny. Yes, it was because of their fragrance and that they are petite. I am glad you liked this one. I don't write too much love poetry, so I thought I would give it a try.

[Moonie]

Beautifully written and presented. The third stanza really touched my heart. Going to my favourites!!:))

[willweb]

Thank you for saving this to your favorites. I am happy you enjoyed this one that much.

[Lyn Anderson]

A nice form, and good word usage to get the message across.

[willweb]

Thank you KLGoode for your nice words.

[Cory Barrett]

Well isn't this a lovely piece!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Streamline.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh wow Will this is so great :)

[willweb]

Happy you liked this one Vidya. Your avatar is purple so I thought you might like violets.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....very true .I do like violets .You are very welcome Will :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the blooming scent of love as it opens up before us.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Jacob.

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful!

:) Julie

[willweb]

Thank you Julie for always being so nice to me.