New Dawn

Morning fades the dark clouds,

as sunrise weaves its light

into my weary heart -

Shining hope on the edge

of a brand new dawn

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

A beautiful write. Every new dawn brings new hope and new adventures. It's a new day, time to let go of past negatives. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Madalyn for your nice review today. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[Rita L. Sev]

Shining hope on the edge
of a brand new dawn

What an uplifting poem, Will! Enjoyed this bit of sunshine!

[willweb]

Thank you Rita for those nice words. I am glad you enjoyed this one.

[Lyn Anderson]

the as sunrise weaves its light into my weary heart is a beautiful line -- well done, this little gem.

[willweb]

Thank you so much KLGoode. Happy you liked this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Most excellent pen Will.You have said much with your few lines :)

[willweb]

Vidya, I am always happy when you read my poetry. Thank you for your nice review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and as always it was my pleasure :)

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful write, my friend. I liked to think that every moment is a new dawn:)

[willweb]

That is a nice way to view it. Thank you Pryde, I am happy you liked this one.

[Corset]

this just brightens they way the reader feels when reading it , it's short and sweet but it does the job it was written to do.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Corset for your nice comments. I am happy you enjoyed this one

[MsJewel]

Simply beautiful

:) Julie

[willweb]

Thank you so much Julie.

[s y e]

Short but oh so powerful... This is some powerful poetry Will, your mind is deep.

[willweb]

Thank you Noodlehead for your nice comments.