Shining Down

Deep within the luster
of a falling midnight star
Blazing cross the skies
for all to see

The only beauty that I need
is glowing where you are
Shining down from heaven
just for me

Reviews

[Moonie]

Short and sweet and brilliant. Love how you used the rhymes. :))

[willweb]

Thank you so very much. Your nice words have me smiling.

[Einstein Noodle]

this is beautiful ... short and sweet .. we are so fortunate to wake up .. roll over .. and see the heavens right there at our side ... i am a sucker for this very romantic poem

E.

[willweb]

Thank you Einstein Noodle for this wonderful reveiw of my poem. Happy you liked my romantic attempt.

[Shirlena]

This reminds me of a certain scene where a firefly is in love with a star. I'm so inamored with poems that include the night sky...short but completely impressive wil.

[willweb]

Shirlena, I am pleased you enjoyed this poem. Your nice review has really made me smile this afternoon. Thank you so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Live the rhyme and rhythm in this. A sweet and hopeful sentiment, too! Nicely done, Will!

[willweb]

Thank you for your nice omments Rita. Happy you liked this one.

[Lyn Anderson]

Very dreamy and romantic -- sounds a little hopeful.

[willweb]

That is my first "dreamy". Thank you so much for that KLGoode. Happy this one touched you.

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

Highly romantic and very swoonable! =D I enjoyed reading your poem! It's winning essense was in it's simplicity and direct to the heart approach.

Hugs! - Kate

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Kate for this wonderful review of my peom. I am happy you liked it.

[Matching Socks]

Oh Will...
You do have such a way.
It has a light feel to it but a sad undertone.
For if the light is shining down from Heaven..
I enjoyed reading this, very much.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for always being so nice Ance. I am happy you liked this one.