And a dog

Paper plates and plastic forks

Leftover pork and beans

A worn out recliner

A television

and a dog

 

Who doesn’t care about me either

Reviews

[Confuser]

It cannot be that bad. It made me smile. thank you.

[willweb]

Happy it made you smile Dale. Thanks so much.

[Confuser]

Y/W..................................................................D:

[Barbara Walker]

some people think that writing short poems is easy. It is not easy when written, as this one is, saying so very much with so few words. I enjoyed reading this piece. kudos!

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Barbara for your nice comments on my little offering. I am happy you liked this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh hush Mister Will.There are lots of people who care about you .This I know for sure.Very deeply sad write my friend :)

[willweb]

Hushing. :) Thank you Vidya, you always make me smile when you read and comment on my work.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome buddy :)

[s y e]

Awh, this is bloody straightforward, ain't it, Will. I am sure there are tons who care for you.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Noodlehead for your nice review.

[Cory Barrett]

screams the life of a bachelor

[willweb]

How could you tell? Thank you Streamline, I am pleased you liked this one.

[Thea]

I find this entertaining and unique. Pretty much thought of my dog who always stares at me for no reason. LOL. But I can feel something sad and deep in this poem. Short but definitely catchy! I enjoyed it. Keep writing. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Thrinna for you nice comments today. I am happy you enjoyed this.

[Rita L. Sev]

You lure the reader with the possibility that this will be a lesson in simplicity... then reveal the harsh reality of loneliness, all in 6 lines. A spark of genius here, I'd say, Will.

[willweb]

Thank you Rita for that wonderful review of my poetry. I am so glad you liked this one.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is sad. I will have to point you to one I wrote a while back that is somewhat like this. Nicely done. A lot said with a little.

[willweb]

Thank you so much KLGoode for your nice comments. Please do point it out to me.