Coral Reef Dreams

 

 

Straight from my anchored heart,

somewhere off the coast of your beauty

Floating on salt laced breezes,

waves of seascape affection,

mother of pearl wishes

sealed within a glass bottle

follow the tide to your feet,

nestled in the cool wet sand

 

***

 

Inside rests sunrise words

expressing my love in

unyielding ocean desires

on the crest of your island smile,

written in my trembling hand

of deep fathomed longings

and coral reef dreams,

for your eyes only

 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Man that's a boat load of metaphors. Good one

[willweb]

Thanks so much for your nice review. I hope you didn't get seasick. :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautifully penned makes me think
of the beach and ocean how Lovely.




Straight from my anchored heart,

somewhere off the coast of your beauty

Floating on salt laced breezes,

waves of seascape affection,

mother of pearl wishes

sealed within a glass bottle

follow the tide to your feet,

nestled in the cool wet sand


Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Kindred poet for this nice review. I am happy you liked this one.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

it was a pleasure to read. you're very welcome. Blessings. Benita / Kindred poet

[Kayleigh]

Damn Will, the analogy here was out of this world good. You blow me away with every bit of writing you do, I am a huge fan, indeed.

[willweb]

Kayleigh, thank you ever so much for always being so nice to me. Your sweet words make me smile.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the way you used the analogy to the coral reef in this...

a love poem of quality and felt by this reader...i have been snorkeling in Tobago...the reef so beautiful, all the exquisite sea life...there is such beauty...

a beauty that definitely can be compared to a love felt. we swim in the beauty and contentment.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Jacob for your nice words today. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

[Pryde Foltz]

written in my trembling hand
of deep fathomed longings
and coral reef dreams,
for your eyes only

I see Bond on a beach … wonderful work WW.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Pryde for this wonderful review of my poem. You obviously have a license to thrill, because your words sure did thrill me. :) I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Pryde Foltz]

Hahaha … you have just had a View to a Thrill;)