Little Bird

Little Bird

 

I saw a little bird the other day

It flew headfirst into a brick wall

and died alone on the sidewalk below

I laughed at first until I realized

that little bird was me

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Poor birdie. Yes … but sometimes that little bird shakes it off and flies again … a little lopsided, but hey ... flying is flying.

[willweb]

I have witnessed that as well. Thanks so much Pryde.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow. I clicked on this one before it was ready. This one is quite dark indeed, but really well done for so few words it packs a gut punch.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KLGoode. It is dark, that's for sure. Sometimes I feel like this though and I figured, might as well get it out thre. I appreciate your kindness to me always. I always look forward to your reviews.

[KWP]

Ouch ... then double ouch ...

Fly free little bird ... you must soar high into the clouds to reach beyond those damn brick walls

I like this and then I don't and then I like it all over again

The title got me ... I didn't like the little bird dying

Then I realised i am always running into walls of some description

Well done xx x

[willweb]

Thanks so very much. Sometimes those brick walls just pop up out of nowhere and no matter what you do, you just can't avoid them. I know this was dark, it just came to me that way. Thank you again so much for stopping by to read and comment. I am thrilled you liked this.

[micky]

I think the reason I am the first to review this is because this is so truthful it might scare people, but I love this piece and the wording should never be changed :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much for being the first one here. You may be right about that. But, it is what it is. Thanks again.