Northern thoughts

A feather falls,
floating on this cool autumn breeze
Aimlessly spinning
until it lands at my feet

I look up and see two silhouettes
against an azure backdrop
Happily flying towards the south,
taking my thoughts north

Where winter has embraced the landscape
in a fresh blanket of pristine snow
Glistening on pine tree branches,
tickling fields once green

And I smile knowing
in this chilly place of frozen lakes
and sub zero sunrises
waits my warmth - and it is you

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very romantic love poem .. season relevant .. images took me on the ride without exertion :) nice one!
E.

[willweb]

Happy you could travle freely through this one E. Thanks so very much.

[MsJewel]

You have created some beautiful images in this sweet and romantic poem. Absolutely stunning my friend. This is a poem I will read again and again..

:) Julie

[willweb]

Coming from a fantastic love poetess, I will take that as a huge compliment. Thank you so much Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

A love from northern climes -- a way to warm the heart as the outside temperature falls. A really nice well structured and presented piece.

[willweb]

Thanks KLGoode so much for these nice words. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[Laura Lynn]

I like how you have left in tact the grammar so that one may understand with perfect completeness the succession of sentences. A feather does fall so and winter is here, the cold embraces us in a pleasant way as long as we are not out too long in it. I like silhouettes. It's amazing how pretty and aloof these creatures of the air are at twilight let's say or any time of day.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Laura. Nature is amazing

[Zakari Schmidt]

Such a serene picture you have painted, will..vivid thoughts of warmth in winters embrace. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to reflecting upon it

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Zachary. I am thrilled you liked it.