Little Bird 2

The follow up to Little Bird

 

 

I picked up that little bird

and noticed a pulse

Caressed its wings and

kept it warm until it moved

In its mirror black eyes

I saw a reflection,

it was you - holding me

Author's Note

This is the original poem http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Willweb/1437946/

Reviews

[Sunny]

very nice addition to add to the first one. :) well done Will!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Sunny. I am happy you liked my sequel.

[Sunny]

any time will :)

[Pryde Foltz]

We hold each other up in this world, for sure. Beautiful write, Will.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Pryde for commenting on my little sequel. I thought I'd lighten it up a bit.

[Confuser]

Of course I like it. Will it flow with the first? Thanks.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Confuser. I didn't want everyone to think I was so dark. :)

[Confuser]

I'm Dale - and I didn't think that at all.

[Matching Socks]

Wow, love this.
Like the ending much better than the last one too.
It's much happier. :)

[willweb]

Thank you Ana. I was hoping you would like this ending better. :) I appreciate you so much.