Seasoned love

 

 

Loneliness followed me

through winter's windy snowfall

as my empty heart wept frozen tears

 

Until that day you strolled into

a blooming spring garden

and I fell for you amidst the fragrant air

 

So I sent you a message of love

on a warm summer breeze

and waited for your reply

 

When a strong gust blew in 

filled with colorful leaves

and I knew you had fallen for me too

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

hahahaha
This is so cute!!!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Suk. I am happy you liked this one.

[The Black Warrior]

My pleasure, thank you for sharing!

[s y e]

So romantic, I love this one. You can write a poem on anything and I'd still fall in love with it.

[willweb]

Thank you Noodlebumble again for your kind words.

[Matching Socks]

A beautiful poem from your romantic heart.
Nicely done my friend.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Ana. Coming from someone who writes such soft love poems, that means a lot to me.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is soft and romantic, and beautifully written. One minor thing, generally, I would see amidst the fragrant air as opposed to amongst, which generally implies a crowd of people rather than a thing.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KLGoode. I believe you have caught me on that once before.

[Lyn Anderson]

That is entirely possible since it's one of my ocd list.:)

[willweb]

Is that Overly Corrective Disorder? Just kidding.

[Confuser]

Now, this is absolutely Fantastic. The best you have ever written. It is not because of the GREAT difficulty I have with writing love poems, even though as I concentrated on your words in the back of my mind I was thinking Wow, I wish I could do this. What a great flow, descriptions phenomenal. I loved it. Tried to write a love poem yesterday and wanted to scream. Had to take it apart; make the girl mean and didn't like that. This is wonderful.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Dale. You comments are greatly appreciated. I am more than thrilled you liked this one.

[Confuser]

Y/W......truly wonderful...........................D]

[Ma'at]

you are so talented...i really love the way you use word choice, it always fits perfectly x

[willweb]

Thanks so much Robbers for always leaving such nice comments for me

[R Smith]

lovely writing as always Will, your art is in your talent for love stories which are always entertaining :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Richard. I appreciate these nice words.