To the sunrise

Inspired by Ana Sophia's Love, Stars and Space

                         Caught in the crossfire

                     

                                of a broken moon and a falling star,

                                 

               closed my eyes and made a wish

                    

                                        on the wrong one,

         

                  losing you

                    

                            to the sunrise

 

Author's Note

You can read Ana's poem here http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1454408/

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very short poem. With a bit of sadness. Lost love, beautiful, Will. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thanks Rudi so much for your visit.

[MsJewel]

So much beauty in so few words. Lovely!

:) Julie

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Julie.

[Ana B.]

very touching and sentimental. There must be truth in the words ''be careful of what you wish for'' ...
loved it.

[willweb]

Sometimes that is true, but some wishes are wonderful when they come true. Thank you so very much Ana B.

[Matching Socks]

Very cool poem Will. Love the way you put your own spin on it.

[willweb]

Thank you for the inspiration Ana. Happy you liked this.

[Matching Socks]

Aww, you're welcome Will. So glad to inspire such a sad poem. : P

[willweb]

You know what I meant. :)

[Matching Socks]

Yes, I know what you meant. Just teasing.