In a poem

I found you in a poem...

waiting between the verses

as metaphoric visions

pulled me in atop the ripples,

placing me before every winter breath

as I read with my eyes closed

dreaming of what I might find

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

Ah, always a writer of such visuals you are hon, a real delight to absorb your words and imagery, just amazing! xo

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Poppy. I am happy you liked this one

[Ma'at]

I love the sweetness and simplicity in this, yet there's so much complexity within the lines and what you've written :) great job x

[willweb]

Thank you again Daniela. I really appreciate your nice words to me.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's always nice to find something between the lines in a poem. :) I hope you will enjoy it. Fine little poem. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thank you RudI. You never know what you might find.

[The Black Warrior]

as I read with my eyes closed

dreaming of what I might find


^My fav. line! :D this is beautiful, very romantic and sweet!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Suk. I am happy you liked this one

[The Black Warrior]

My pleasure, thank you for sharing! ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Dreamy and magical, your words are ultra romantic in this one, Will. So lovely. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Lydi.

[Matching Socks]

Soft and lovely.
Beautiful poem Will! :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ana.

[Matching Socks]

Anytime... :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

This was stunning so beautiful
in just so few words.



Sounds like the poem or
the Elegant verse of a lovely Lady
so many things can be lovely between
a verse in a poem upon the lips of a poet.



"I found you in a poem...

waiting between the verses

as metaphoric visions

pulled me in atop the ripples"




This was very inspiring thank you
for sharing this stunning piece.



God bless. Benita

[willweb]

Thank you Benita

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. :)