Reflection in a tear drop

I am leaving a tear drop

on a brand new leaf

in this garden that you

so loved to play in

 

So that when you look down

you will see your beauty

reflected in a part of me

and know I love you

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

simply beautiful! tragic longing and brilliant fire of love songs ringing forever ..so sad!!
E.

[willweb]

Thank you so much E. Some things are just sad.

[s y e]

Oh this is just beautiful... You could sweep any girl off her feet. Truly beautiful.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Noodlebumble.

[R Smith]

that's so beautiful Will, just a dreamy love song, she can't fail to be impressed with such amazing poetry :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Richard. This one pulled at my heart as I wrote it.

[The Black Warrior]

I-LOVED-IT!

This is my favorite part:


So that when you look down

you will see your beauty

reflected in a part of me

and know I love you

Just beautiful Will...thank you for sharing!

[willweb]

Thank you so much friend. I am thrilled you found this one and it touched you.

[The Black Warrior]

Thank you for sharing Will, your works are truly wonderful...keep writing!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful image, Will. A tear drop, part of you, mirroring the beauty of your love. Glad you shared this. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thanks so much Rudi. I just felt I had to write this one

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely sweet and sad tear drop of a poem.

[willweb]

Thanks so much KL.

[Matching Socks]

This makes me want to drop a tear drop of my own.
Very beautiful poem Will.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Ana. I am happy you liked this one.