Will you

If I fall will you catch me
make everything fine

Will you hold me so close
for the rest of all time

Will you whisper I love you
in poetic rhyme

If I fall will you catch me
forever be mine

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Simple and beautiful. Well done.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much KL.

[The Black Warrior]

We all hope and pray to find someone who will catch us and hold us so tight to the point of not been able to breath. LOL this is beautiful Will as always :D thank you for sharing.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Suk. I am thrilled you liked this one.

[The Black Warrior]

You're very welcome! :D

[Ghost of Jupiter]

We all hope to find that one person who will always be there to catch is ... To support is through all things. It takes a special person to be there through life' and love's ups and downs. When you find that one...hold on for dear life. :) wonderful write Will, it is so novice to be reading you again.

[willweb]

Thank you so much my good friend. I appreciat your kindness.

[R Smith]

lovely poem Will, i love these style of work, the simplicity of poetry but such a powerful write, its gorgeous thanks Will :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Richard.

[Einstein Noodle]

simple ..lovely .. a perfect Valentine card for ones lover
E.

[willweb]

Too bad it's not February. :) Thank you E for your visit.

[Einstein Noodle]

it will be here in a blink ;)

[Ana B.]

Lovely write. Simple and emotional - absolutely perfect! 800 members tag (Poetry 101)

[willweb]

Thank you Ana B. I'll ask you too...Poetry 101...800 memebr tag????

[Ana B.]

:) yes, you got that right :)

[willweb]

What does it mean?

[Ana B.]

well, this group (Poetry 101) has reached 800 members and all the members are ''celebrating'' it by tagging Poetry 101....... i hope you don't mind.

[willweb]

I don't mind...I just didn't understand. Thanks.

[Ana B.]

Anytime Will. It will probably happen this once....the tag, so i'll keep reviewing your work. Enjoying it :)

[Dannyisawriter]

This poem had such a sentiment to that it brought a smile to my face! Tbh I don't know what else to tell you aside from I enjoyed it :D

[willweb]

That will be enough for me my friend. Thanks so much.

[s y e]

If I say yes...
Would you mind?

hehe, couldn't resist! I love this one Will, this is exactly the questions I ask myself about a crush or whatever... Believe it, my friend, she'll catch you and never let you go - You're a keeper!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for those uplifting words Noodlebumble

[Confuser]

Your writing is always great, and puts a smile on my face. Thank you so much wil - great work. Poetry 101 Tag Oh well.

[willweb]

Thank you Dale...poetry 101 tag????

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's all about believing, Will. If it's love and if you fall, she always will catch you. :) Rudi

[willweb]

You are exactly correct Rudi. Thanks so much