Walk with me neath falling snow

 

 

As my heart does plead your name

In amongst the shivered calls

Crystalline of flowing climb

Snow of winter’s fingers falls

 

Footprints on a path of white

Longing but to find their way

To your arms this warmth I seek

This the place they long to stay

 

Moon glow patterns calm the scene

Stars design in spiral form

Tiny crystal coated skies

Softly sway this winter storm

 

Through the branches, evergreen

Shadows dance on petals soft

In this garden of my dreams

Clouds of silver hang aloft

 

My eyes search this twilight bliss

Past the gates of iron glaze

For this perfect winter’s bloom

Here before my lonely days

 

Touch me sweet of drifting dreams

On the stems before my sight

Kiss me now, my precious flower

Hold me close this chilly night

 

Walk with me neath falling snow

Wrapped so warm my arms they hold

As our love once more is born

Out here on this evening cold

 

 

Author's Note

Trying my hand at rhyming love poetry

Reviews

[Ana B.]

This is amazing....the title, the lines....every last drop. Love poetry suits you :)

[willweb]

Thanks you so very much for your kindness.

[Dannyisawriter]

This was great!!!!!! Keep trying :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your visit.

[R Smith]

carry on trying Will because this is fantastic and i'm guessing your trying has paid off really well :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend for alwasy stopping by and leaving such nice comments for me.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! Will, this is beyond words.

Have shared this on google+ with the following text:
Such a beautiful winter and love poem, you have to taste the words, to feel the senses in the sentences, the flow of feelings in this magnificent poem of Willweb, a poet on Writerscafe. Just great!

:) Rudi

[willweb]

Wow, thank you so much Rudi for this wonderful review and your kindness in sharing my poem. I am humbled by your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

A Winter walk and the emotion of love.
"Walk with me neath falling snow
Wrapped so warm my arms they hold
As our love once more is born
Out here on this evening cold "
Some the cold of Winter is when love can know rebirth. I like the feel of hope and description of walk and trying to find something lost. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Every moment with the one you love, whether warm and sunny or cold and snowy is a beautiful experience. Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.

[MomzillaNC]

You filled the hushed and frigid quiet of snowfall with the warm of romance and the beat of the heart of love.

[willweb]

You are too knid...thank you so very much.

[MomzillaNC]

"Knid" LOL

YW

[willweb]

Sorry..small screen this morning...hard to see. :)

[MomzillaNC]

Just poking a little fun!

[MsJewel]

Absolutely stunning! The rhyme and flow is perfect...the images gorgeous. My new favorite by you!

:) Julie

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Julie for your kind words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Always good to try new forms Will and if this is your first it is very good. Has a classic feel to it and indeed is romantic and expressionate.

[willweb]

Thank you.

[Confuser]

Well, that meter as they say is pretty tight. I just loved the poem, the flow, the great metaphors and that lovely ride down the path you always provides that leaves me with a smile, they walk away hand in hand in the snow warming each other as they go; you did a beautiful job. I loved it from the beginning, and forget about those flying metaphors that kept me wanting more. I cannot pick out a line I like best, seriously, the whole writing is lovely. Thank you so much. My library years for this!

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Dale for always being so kind to me. I am happy you liked this one.

[Confuser]

Re-reading; beautiful. Tks.

[Bhumika Devkota]

The rhyming is great. This is a great piece. So sweet and romantic.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your kind words.