Unravels

 

 

The sun sets

on this long day

as clouds flow in

cherry lemonade whispers

somewhere off in the distance

 

and

 

I know it will not be long until

I am in your arms once more

feeling your love

as it unravels

upon me

Author's Note

Hey, I wanted to join the party too. :)

Kalypso and Ana both wrote poems with a variation of the word "unravel" in the title. I just thought I'd hop on board as well.

Here are the links to their poems if you'd like to read.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/kalypso/1457060/

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1457896/

Reviews

[Ana B.]

''cherry lemonade whispers'' smashing thought. Beautiful.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[Dannyisawriter]

This was a really sweet poem. Well done :) I honestly thought it was going to be depressing by the title but I was wrong

[willweb]

I am happy you were surprised. Thanks so much.

[R Smith]

beautiful poem Will, it unravels so very well, bravo :)

[willweb]

I like that Richard...thanks so much my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

"Cherry lemonade whispers" WOW....innocence and decadence all rolled up into one, Will! A poem filled with passion and longing....so romantic. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thank you so much Lydi for your wonderful comments. I am thrilled you stopped by.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautifum Will, it's simple and cute, just another good poem. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thank you Rudi. Did you read Ana and Kalypso's poem too?

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Now I have done, Will, very fine job of all three of you. :) Rudi

[Confuser]

It is great. I truly enjoyed it will. Going to read there poems now. You make it seem so easy. Great looking font and display, wording just simply devine. I want some cherry lemonade too...Thanks.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Dale. I hope you like their poems too, they were my inspiration.

[Confuser]

You're welcome Will, well done. Thanks so much for your encouragement.

[Sunny]

A true poet, well done Will! i have to say the cherry lemonade part is my favorite! Though I don't think I've had the chance to try some. :P

[willweb]

Thank you Sunny. Hopefully someday you can try some.

[Sami Khalil]

"I am in your arms once more
feeling your love
as it unravels
upon me"

You are unraveling indeed as a great poet and a romantic writer. Bravo, sir...:).......................

[willweb]

Thank you so much Sami. Not sure I can compare to you...but I'm trying.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Thank you kindly for all...:).....

[therisa]

A longing
To fall deep
Into your embrace
Without guilt.

Stripping the soul
Of all worldly cares
For a brief moment.

To breeze in
Your heavenly scent
Among the roses
And magnolias.

Knowing
This moment
Is fleeting
At best
Between us.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[therisa]

Your Welcome, Will.

[Ma'at]

i like this a lot, nice word choice :) x

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. Be sure to read Kalypso's and Ana's as well.