Dawn's Serenade

 

 

Pacing the foothills of adoration…

collecting thoughts on garden walkways,

reaching for a hyacinth,

strolling neath an arbor of opened arms

yearning for your heart in fragrant aromas

 

“For this longing builds of

sun warmed wishes and morning glory hopes”

 

Rose petals call you by name,

harmonic melodies in breathless breezes

as four leaf clover dotted lawns

offer chiffon coated whispers

on Sunday porch swings  

 

“I sway to their song,

mesmerized by the beauty that is you”

 

As shadows grow, twilight brings with it

the gleaming effects of the evening’s first star,

pale in glow next to you

as even the cloudiest skies can not

diminish the sunset beauty

of your eyes

 

“Within my mind these chestnut gems

twinkle in unison with dancing constellations”

 

The time now comes to rest, to dream

of waterfall passions, lost in your kiss,  

breaths of satin skin caressing mine,

drenched in the moon’s soft light

creating silhouettes of love

floating on desire…

 

“And I drift off, soothed by your essence

awaiting dawn’s serenade of a brand new day…in your arms”

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[therisa]

Will, love the way, you have entwined the two poems, like you have here. Each one re-inforcing the previous stanza, you have written. And yes, you have earn 97 sighs, out of 100. :) Sorry, not a perfect hundred, as I want this to continue, forever.

[willweb]

No problem my friend, 97 sighs are just fine with me. I appreciate you visiting this poem today and leaving me such nice words.

[therisa]

Your welcome, Will.

[Tiana]

Absolutely beautiful! Goes to my library to enjoy :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much for your kindness.

[Tiana]

it was my pleasure ...

[Sami Khalil]

Effective, powerful and dreamy in a lovely way. A wonderful title too...:)............

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Sami. I appreciate your kindness

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the two poems in one effect....quite a romantic and dreamy sequence show here.

[willweb]

Thanks Jacob, just sneaking out of the box a little.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description used in the poem.
"The time now comes to rest, to dream
of waterfall passions, lost in your kiss,
breaths of satin skin caressing mine,
drenched in the moon’s soft light
creating silhouettes of love"
Above lines. You create a vision of a perfect place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

floating on desire…

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Coyote, I am thrilled you liked this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

This is beautiful Will.
How nice it must be to start everyday in the arms of the one you love.

[willweb]

If it ever happens for me I'll let you know. Just a little poetic dreaming my friend. You know me...Will the unkissed. :)

[Matching Socks]

Yes, I hear you're famous around here for that. :)

[willweb]

I just noticed, if I add an "S" I can be Will the Sunkissed. Orange you glad I pointed that out? :)

[Matching Socks]

Very Cute. :)