Gold leaf shimmers

You are my sunrise

Breezes call from a tangerine mist
softly beneath apricot skies
Fluttering along heart strings,
silver threaded dreams
cascading upon me,
soothing my worried sighs
as dawn sends
on desire's gold leaf shimmers,
the sweetest kisses
from you...

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! sweet love ...
and gotta appreciate the Baby's comment! lots of color and tastes .. feels uplifting ...feels good!
E.

[Baby Ricochet]

It's raining fruit loops up in here. good one

[willweb]

I hear ya. And they wont stop falling. Thanks so much BR.

[Amber Lily]

This poem comes off as sweet and colorful, almost like a fruit! It's pleasant to read and leaves you feeling good :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Amber for your kindness

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and gentle words. You led the reader to good places and very nice visions. Sweet kiss is never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Ana B.]

Sweet and pure......'' apricot skies'' damn... brilliant. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Ana B. Sometimes they just look that way. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

This is really beautifully worded, Will - romance dances in your colorful descriptions.

[willweb]

Thanks Rita...love does produce the best dance steps...doesn't it?

[Valentine]

How sweetly romantic and so well delivered. Valentine.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Valentine.

[Lizardo]

''silver threaded dreams
cascading upon me, ''
Ah such a beautiful poem, it's really nice to read, it kind carries a thing that makes you relax
once again, Great poem!

[willweb]

Happy you could relax with this one Lizardo. Thank you so very much.

[Lizardo]

You are welcome! I do enjoy your writing

[DoormanDan]

This is very beautiful poetry. I really love the imagery in this piece, and your use of vocab really adds a nice flavor to this poem. You are clearly a very talented writer :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Dan. I appreciate the kind words you have left here for me today. I was inspired by a sunrise I saw this past weekend. I am happy you liked this one.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your aim is true, Will...like an arrow through the heart. Such a lovely lament for a Valentine, I'd say!

[willweb]

Thank so very much Kelly. It always thrills me when you stop by.