Gold leaf shimmers

You are my sunrise

Breezes call from a tangerine mist
softly beneath apricot skies
Fluttering along heart strings,
silver threaded dreams
cascading upon me,
soothing my worried sighs
as dawn sends
on desire's gold leaf shimmers,
the sweetest kisses
from you...

Reviews

[R Smith]

Mr. Romance is alive and Will, beautiful words enough to seduce the hardest heart, good luck with her Will :)

[willweb]

Alive and Will...I like that Richard. Thanks so much my friend...just trying to keep up with your beautiful romantic poetry.

[R Smith]

you passed me about 10 miles back :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh.....splendiferously romantic. Glorious imagery. Lydi**

[willweb]

I like that word, even if I can't pronounce it. :) Thank you so very much Lydi. I always smile when you stop by.

[Lydia Shutter]

and you make me smile, Will.....which is a good thing.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

On desire's gold leaf shimmers..., excellent, Will. :) Rudi

[willweb]

Thanks so much Rudi. The sunrise always inspires me

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Very sweet!
Could be a greeting card for the Lover's holiday...
Nice write that puts a smile on my face.
Love--powerful in so many ways.
A mood changer.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Josie. I am happy you liked this one.

[MomzillaNC]

Ahhhh… the only drug any of us need… Love!

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Momz. Yep, that's the best one to be addicted to. :)

[MomzillaNC]

yw ;)

[Cool Girl]

If you wrote this for s special person, they are very lucky. I love the emotion and passion in this piece. The words flow beautifully. Excelent job:)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Cool Girl. Do I still seem sad?

Oh, and yes I did and I hope they feel that way.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome:)

[Cool Girl]

Yes, you do still seem a bit sad...

[Cindy Marietta]

This is so beautiful :) The descriptive words you used are so perfect, creates great imagery. So sweet :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Amanda.

[katja]

there's a serene, oneiric quality to this piece...
... like waking up inside a cloud or something equally fantastic
*
"apricot skies" & "silver threaded dreams" are just two of the evocative images which caught my attention...
... all in all, a lovely piece, much enjoyed.
thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina

[willweb]

Thank you so very much miss m for your kind words today. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[ANTO]

Ah the old triangles back together again guys - just us 3 here

Tis gorgeous Will. Truly, my friend.

[willweb]

Ha...so which side am I? Thanks so much ANTO. The three of us do look good together.

[Matching Socks]

Every day should start with a sweet good morning kiss, like this.
Beautiful as always.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ana. Seems I dream in the mornings more than when I'm asleep. :)