Already Written

 

 

Sitting beneath a crescent moon

watching fireflies frolic amidst

pine needles swaying as

rhythmic motions of light entrance

 

Harmonic whispers of nightfall desires

come as music to my mind,

lyrics afloat on rhyming breezes

in the key of unquestioned love

 

I take pen in hand

as a starlit melody traces

over my thoughts, like a fallen leaf

on a slow lingering stream

 

Though try as I might

on this enchanted evening

where my every dream is you…

I can not write this song

 

For it has already been written,

perfect words in eternal ink

of the deepest devotion

on my heart…by you

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Beautiful and well penned.
Love it.
:)

[TL Boehm]

such a lovely write. It put a lump in my throat. Beautiful words, Will.

[Cassie]

this one swept me, you are such an amazing writer Will.

[dan]

Will, You continue to show how adept you are at using seamless imagery to guide the reader along, help to convey the message of which you write. And, as always, your message is very well conceived and presented. I think I'm officially a member of your fan club. Please keep writing! take care...dan

[Saddam]

That's awesome................
Lovely I must say.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much SSADD

[Dannyisawriter]

Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[willweb]

Thank you so much Danny

[R Smith]

excellent as always Will, your romance is the first and foremost on here....apart from Ms Jewel, i'd love to see you collab with her, great writing mate :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Richard. I always appreciate your visits. Have you seen her collabs with Trace...that is a completely different level of good than I can come up with.

[R Smith]

rubbish Will you're as good as them anyday :)

[~]

Enchanted with each verse. Filled my cup with romance. :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much.

[MomzillaNC]

So much to love about this poem! The third stanza absolutely SINGS!

[willweb]

Thanks so much Momz. Is that you I hear singing?

[MomzillaNC]

Gimme a tune!

[willweb]

November Rain - GnR :)

[MomzillaNC]

Not someone else's tune! :D

[willweb]

Oh...sorry. :)

[MomzillaNC]

LOL :)

[MomzillaNC]

BTW, that's my favorite Guns n Roses song!

[willweb]

Its #2 for me...Sweet Child O' Mine is my #1 favorite song

[MomzillaNC]

That one's great too!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

" For it has already been written,
perfect words in eternal ink
of the deepest devotion
on my heart…by you "

I can't explain in words how much this poetry touched me and the last stanza is damn beautiful. I'm a regular fan of your writing but still this one didn't failed to shock me .Thank you for such a nice share ! :))

[willweb]

Thank you so very much ReD for your always kind words to me. This one was special to me and I am happy you enjoyed it.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

You are welcome ! It was really splendid