Bad dream

I dreamt of her and I

walking naked along a

secluded stretch of beach

as a bright full moon

illumined her gorgeous body

and when I woke

my first thought was...

 

walking?

 

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Walking, indeed. In such situations the horizontal would be much preferred.

[willweb]

Exactly, well that's my luck. Thanks so much John

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a romantic scene...the sea, the sand, and naked people neath the moon! Damn, you woke up? That's downright cruel! Lydi**

[willweb]

I know, damn alarm clocck. : )
Thanks so much Lydi.

[Perry]

Ha! Perfect. "Bad Dream," is straight to the poetic point, a correct use of language that trancends those pesky grammatic subjugates as the worst of poisons, rhythmless prose, artless paint-by-number renderings, the lead, vivisecting sinkers of voice. One should lean upon them lightly or sound like everyone else. And isn't that the problem in the final analysis? Planes sputtering down a bombed-out airstrip, unable to fly for all the chains they've stolen. Well done, Willweb!

[willweb]

Wow, that was a mouthful or a brainful. : ) Thanks so much Perry. next time I am on one of those bombed out airstrips I am going to think of you and complain about the delays at the gate. : )

[Ken e Bujold]

ah the power of deams. A great write will

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ken. I was hoping people would get a chuckle out of this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Those dreams can take us to better places. I liked the location and I like to walk the beaches at 6am. With good company, if possible. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Too funny. Just lay her down gently in the surf but watch out for crabs. I had a great gal once. Then I lobster and I never flounder again. I enjoyed the read.

[willweb]

Thank so much Fabian. I shore am glad you enjoyed this one, I wrote it on porpoise. : )

[Fabian G. Franklin]

(laughing) I'm glad to see someone has as corny a sense of humor as I do. What was the hermit crab's girlfriend's name? Myshell...