Enchanting

I watched the moon rise

above the ocean,

slowly climbing in the evening sky

and when I saw its beams

shimmering on the

dark enchanting sea below,

I thought of her eyes

and how the moon

never could quite compare

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

A title that fits so exactly the lovely lines below.

[willweb]

Thank you Ken

[John]

Charming and haiku like in capturing a moment of inspiration.

[willweb]

Thanks so much john. I am glad you liked it.

[softlyfall]

So romantic, in a very almost chthonic, or gothic, or at least twilight way. it reads almost like a revelation of love, or the curtain rising on a romance. I love this one.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I am happy you enjoyed this little poetic moonlit stroll. Thank you reading and commenting

[Ken e Bujold]

moon and a woman's eyes, the two great fonts of a man's poetic soul. Nice write here will

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ken. I know...beauty meets beauty.

[Susan 🦋]

Aww such lovely words... yet, nothing compares to those enchanting eyes.

[willweb]

They were enchanting for sure. Thank you, Susan for your nice thoughts

[Perry]

This is lovely, beguiling, and romantic.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Perry

[KWP]

That's a big call :) But the moon is all mine - so get get 'er .....

[willweb]

Enjoy that moon...I'll bet it loves shining down on you as well. : )
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she must be quite dazzling...to be more enchanting than the moon itself.
love expressed here.
j.

[willweb]

Pretty damn dazzling. She had the prettiest eyes

[Sami Khalil]

Very romantic and worthy of her beauty. A short but sweet poem for a special someone. Romance is wonderful.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiiirrrrr.

[JE Falcon]

Isn't that the truth when one is enchanted by another; well put.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much