Her Smile

"There is nothing more beautiful than the poetry I saw in her smile" - Willweb Her smile is the sunrise that greets me each morning a glowing horizon in shades of the dawn The fragrance of jasmine a flow on the breezes and shimmering dew drops that play on the lawn A hot cup of coffee with cinnamon doughnuts while walking through nature where meadowlarks sing As soft as the petals of roses now blooming where butterflies welcome the coming of spring The shade of an oak tree so cool in the summer with sunflower fields on a sky ever blue As white cotton clouds float in shapes to discover and skipping a stone is the best thing to do Her smile is a poem of euphoric phrases, written affection in mesmeric rhyme The song in my mind that is forever playing, desire filled lyrics to always be mine A tangerine sunset on ribbons of satin that gather each day at the far western skies The stars in the heavens that dance in a moon beam to wish me good night before I close my eyes Then every dream that my sleep now entices to cradle my heart in a wonderful style All that is beautiful, all that is precious and all that I love can be found in her smile

Author's Note

Her smile was beautiful. I still cannot get it out of my mind.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

You adore this lost love and she is a muse for some incredible poetry. Every bit of this is adoring and gorgeous.
I agree with Gee- give this to her. Speaking as a woman, I would melt straight away into a puddle of love if a man wrote this for me.
Assuming she is flesh and blood. If this is a metaphor, please forgive my literal translation once again

[willweb]

Thanks so much Amy. Some women don't melt that easily. :) She is real, no metaphor. I appreciate you nice comment. It made me melt a little. : )

[Coyote Poetry]

I adored the complete poem my friend. Had the feel of a John Donne love poem. You made the reader believe every words.
"Her smile is a poem of euphoric phrases,
written affection in mesmeric rhyme
The song in my mind that is forever playing,
desire filled lyrics to always be mine"
I agree with the above lines. When a woman give you a gift of a smile. You were honored. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend for all of your kindness.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.

[Fran Marie]

A nicely penned poem
with lovely descriptives
so deeply expressed
within the lines

Nice work

[willweb]

Thank you Fran Marie. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

[DIVYA]

Its amazing when another person rocks our world so much. Her smile lights up your day. You're readers are with you in that appreciation, all the way. Beautifully written.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kind words.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome.

[Gee]

As Lorry says, beautiful. What a gift this poem would be if given to your lady.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much

[Lorry]

Flows so beautifully that it seems effortless, which all the best smiles are. Almost like a fully formed thought, without all the bother of having to think it.
Beautiful.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Lorry. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Her smile was definitely inspiring.