Only if

Only if

A Poem by willweb


 

“Man who take off shoes tonight does not know if he will put them on again in the morning” - Fictional character Charlie Chan from the book “The Keeper of the Keys”

 

Darkness cries to grip the barrel

Glistened sheen of metal form

Farewells sing the night in echoes

Tears will tumble come the morn

Cowards way, that has been spoken

Still they crowd the welcome mat

Questioning this quick reversal

Never once of where they’re at

Such a lonely empty fellow

No one left to hold his hand

Ever since she stole his chances

Tossing out what he had planned

Sad, we find the broken reasons

In a letter left his bed

Only if someone had listened

Only if he wasn’t…

 

© 2022 willweb


Author's Note

willweb
Collected thoughts in the midst of reading

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He may well not put his shoes back on when taking them off, but I suspect that a funeral worker might. Even mischievously Bury him in odd shoes, with odd socks too!
I need to rewrite my will so that I get buried properly, in my penguin onesie and slippers. It would be just my luck that heaven exists and I'd hate to look stupid at the gates 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

willweb

3 Years Ago

Hey, some things are important to get right.
Thanks for stopping by
softlyfall

3 Years Ago

St peter has a recurring nightmare of ascending penguins
Lorry

3 Years Ago

Well he's sure as hell... Uhm, I mean heck, in for a surprise with me! 😊



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That is a sad and tragic tangent that you took from the quote, my goodness.
I hope this does not reflect any personal internal turmoil.
Just in case, I am sending virtual hugs


Posted 3 Years Ago


willweb

3 Years Ago

I was sitting there reading the novel when I came across that line and because of what was going on .. read more
softlyfall

3 Years Ago

Oh good, thank you for clearing that up. I was going to have to beat some sense into you
willweb

3 Years Ago

You may need to do that anyway on some days...just not today. : )
He may well not put his shoes back on when taking them off, but I suspect that a funeral worker might. Even mischievously Bury him in odd shoes, with odd socks too!
I need to rewrite my will so that I get buried properly, in my penguin onesie and slippers. It would be just my luck that heaven exists and I'd hate to look stupid at the gates 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

willweb

3 Years Ago

Hey, some things are important to get right.
Thanks for stopping by
softlyfall

3 Years Ago

St peter has a recurring nightmare of ascending penguins
Lorry

3 Years Ago

Well he's sure as hell... Uhm, I mean heck, in for a surprise with me! 😊

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..