Morning laced with love

A morning love poem

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A weary sun awakens past the tree line o’er the hill,

chilly heavens cater to its shine

Dawning eyes now open as it’s light flows ‘long the sill,

the beauty that I see so very fine

 

Turning now to face me as my heart it skips a beat,

lost between the sunrise and the bliss

Taken with desire as our lips this day do meet,

perfectly a Wednesday morning kiss

 

Here within my arms I find temptation in your skin,

warm beneath these blankets, flannel soft

Passion swells like dew drops as my fingertips begin

sighs collect on golden beams aloft

 

Melodies of winter drift in whispers up above,

giggles say that dreams have all come true

As we lie together on this morning laced with love,

wonderful when they begin with you

 

~

Author's Note

Good morning readers

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
I am reading yours one after another as I wait for my Cappuccino to be made.
Now I find another that is, oh so wonderful.
I read the comments made about this poem.
I think it is wonderful when someone ...Divya, spends the time to really write what she sees... commenting on the fact that much of your poem is written in Trochaic meter is so great because it shows that she really read your poem...that she did not just skim through it. I never knew anything about Iambic or trotaic before I posted my work for the very first time ever last January. I posted Hand~In~Hand and immediately was contacted by a very good poet saying that in fact my poem was actually a Sonnet... I had no idea what that was... and, from that point on I have learned so much. Now I know how to write in so many forms. Of course I still write what just pours out of me, but now I spend the time doing little fixes...
I loved this poem of yours.. this one had a wonderful rhymes..
Lisa

[willweb]

Good morning Lisa (though I don't believe it is morning right now in Spain) I too have learned a lot on these poetry sites. There was a time when all I wrote were rhyming poems until someone turned me on to free verse and then I found I loved writing that style as well even though I always lead off with rhymers. There is always something to learn if you take the time to stop, look and listen. Thank you so much for stopping by here today and leaving such nice comments on my poem. I hope your Cappuccino was good.

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
You are most welcome...First stormy wet day here...so nice..perfect for writing...
Great cappuccino this morning..now it is nearly 3:30pm..
Lisa

[willweb]

Ok then, I have to ask, does the rain in Spain fall mainly on the plain? : )

[Lisasview]

Ha ha.. "By George he's got it...I think he's got it!!"
"and, where's that bloody plane..In Spain In Spain!!"
Such fun.. Okay need to sign off now and get ready to go out for dinner and watch a new band... on the sea front..
More tomorrow,
Lisa
I could go on and on...

[willweb]

Have fun...

[Lisasview]

I am always busy so I am always having fun.
This week I will be getting ready for an art sho where I will be demonstrating and hopefully selling my work.
Lisa

[willweb]

Very cool, that sounds like a lot of having fun to me. I wish you much success in your show and sale.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much...
L

[lildot]

Good morning wilweb... I love this piece. You quickly captured my attention and painted a vivid picture in my mind. You also sparked my imagination with your cadence. Well done!

.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one

[willweb]

Good morning to you my friend.

[softlyfall]

Positively lilting, musical, I love this. The only teeny ( don't kill A: the messenger or B: the dingbat who didn't get that it was deliberate?) tiny thing I could say is all of this is trochaic meter except for L1 and L4 of S1
It reads beautifully just the same, so forgive my nit picking.

[willweb]

Well, I don't know if it was deliberate or not but I would lean towards not because I honestly have no earthly idea what trochaic meter is. I just write what feels good at the time and often I seem to switch lanes mid drive but as long as I stay on the right highway, I will get to where I am going....I hope. : ) Thanks so very much Amy.

[DIVYA]

Good morning dear willweb,

Such a perfectly blissful way to begin a day...
I loved how you captured in perfect rhyme, the elation of lovers amidst a blissful sunrise.
Nothing can replace the joy of sharing a brand new day with a loved one, especially under the tender warmth of a quilt. This winter morning love feels in itself like a dream.

[willweb]

Thank you my dear friend for always being so kind to me. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. Good morning to you.

[DIVYA]

It is a pleasure all mine. Please keep sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes Will, the days of Winter make us seek some warmth.
"Melodies of winter drift in whispers up above,
giggles say that dreams have all come true
As we lie together on this morning laced with love,
wonderful when they begin with you"
I did like the above lines. The melodies of Winter allowed us to need the comfort of love near. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate your nice comment

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will. I did enjoy the poetry.