Dawn's Serenade

~

 

Pacing the foothills of adoration…

collecting thoughts on garden walkways,

reaching for a hyacinth,

strolling neath an arbor of opened arms

yearning for your heart in fragrant aromas . . .

 

“For this longing builds of sun warmed wishes

and morning glory hopes”

 

Rose petals call you by name,

harmonic melodies in breathless breezes

as four-leaf clover dotted lawns

offer chiffon coated whispers

on Sunday afternoon porch swings . . .

 

“I sway to their song,

mesmerized by the beauty that is you”

 

As shadows grow, twilight brings with it

the gleaming effects of the evening’s first star,

pale in glow next to you

as even the cloudiest skies can not

diminish the sunset beauty

of your eyes . . .

 

“Within my mind these chestnut gems

twinkle in unison with dancing constellations”

 

The time now comes to rest,

to dream of waterfall passions, lost in your kiss,

whispers on satin skin caressing mine,

drenched in the moon’s soft light

creating silhouettes of love

floating in desire . . .

 

“As I drift off, soothed by your essence, awaiting

dawn’s serenade to a brand new day in your arms”

~

Reviews

[DIVYA]

This poem has quite a surreal, dreamy feel to it.
Exquisite and powerful imagery like chiffon coated whispers, waterfall passions and morning glory hopes, accentuate the effect created thoughout.
Love as an emotion, unleashes such beauty, ignites our imaginations along with our passions.
This poem offers these gifts of love and more to your reader, dear willweb.

[willweb]

Thank you my sweet friend for your wonderful comments always on my poems. I am happy you took the time to read this one and allow it to touch you. I appreciate your visits Divya

[Lisasview]

For some reason Will, this poem of yours gave me chills... good loving chills..Such adoring love in each line...
I loved so much of this..
“Within my mind these chestnut gems
twinkle in unison with dancing constellations”
I love that you used words like chestnut gems! Your choice of words is wonderful.
Now with this poem I see punctuation, different fonts, etc. Interesting...
You definitely have a way with words that pull one in to read.
Loved it!!
Lisa, now in Spain

[willweb]

Thank you again Lisa. I have always been told that I see things differently than most but I think I just have an imagination that is completely out of control. : ) I use punctuation when I hope for a reader to pause briefly so that I can keep the rhytym of the poem in line with my thoughts. To be honest with you, I was not a good student in school and managed to fail English class when I was a senior in high school. Thanks again for spending so much time in my world.

[Lisasview]

Well, it certainly works for you.. Imagination is the key..at least I think so... I hated school.. I never learned anything about poetry.. I just started writing when I was about 10...I have learned a lot in the past 10 months...
L