November kisses

 

November kisses arrive in the sunset

Lips ever sweet flutter soft on my skin

Lost in the sigh of a ending day whisper

Sharing a moment about to begin

 

There in your eyes is my first glimpse of heaven

Calling me into the depths of your soul

Fueling the fire of an unending passion

Sending affection beyond all control

 

You in my arms shines a moonbeam encounter

Shadows at play as we stroll through the trees

Stopping a while under star shimmered visions

Cool the caress of the chilled autumn breeze

 

Here all alone ‘neath the branches a’ swaying

Longing your touch on a night just like this

Floating on echoes of heartbeat affections

Patiently waiting your November kiss

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderfully romantic. Love the rhythm and rhyme contained in these stanzas. Cold November warmed by November kisses. Nice.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you Chris for your kind and humbling comment on my poem

[lightsong]

Oh... how warm and intimate... some of your lines stand for me more than the rest, "November kisses arrive in the sunset.... Lost in the sigh of a ending day whisper... There in your eyes is my first glimpse of heaven"

your words are inviting and play over all the senses, put me in the mood of Sonnets. wonderful and passionate.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I am thrilled and honored that you have visited today and enjoyed my poem. Thank you again.