Look at her smile (A Beatles inspired piece)

Look at her smile (A Beatles inspired piece)

A Poem by willweb
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A piece written to the melody of The Beatles song "Elanor Rigby"

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Ah, all I long to do is know her

Ah, all I long to do is show her

 

Look at her frowning

Seeing the sadness now found in the tears in her eyes

Silent her sighs

 

Why is she waiting

Here on the steps that are worn from the worry she bears

Lost in her stares

 

Life is very lonely

She hasn’t much to say

Life is very lonely

She longs to get away

 

Where is she looking

Off to a place that is empty of something to hold

No one is told

 

What is she thinking

Tossing some crumbs to the birds scattered out on the street

Something to eat

 

Life is very lonely

I ask her to explain

Life is very lonely

She can’t get past the pain

 

Ah, all I long to do is help her

Ah, all I long to do is hold her

 

Eleanor Rigby

Gives me her hand as I lead her to someplace she knows

Happiness grows

 

Look at her smile

All that she needed was someone to show her the way

It’s a new day

 

She’s no longer lonely

Her heart it has been spared

She’s no longer lonely

She’s found someone who cared

© 2022 willweb


Author's Note

willweb
Most I am sure will not know this song but those who do, how do the lyrics fit to the music? I just got a wild hair and thought I would try to find a way to make Elanor happy.
Thank you if you stop by to read.

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I do not know the song but I'm interested in finding it now.
I love the poem though and I'm very happy she's got some happiness now!


Posted 3 Years Ago


willweb

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ciara. Hopefully someday you will hear it.
Ciara

3 Years Ago

You're welcome and I did hear it. I found it on you tube
🙂

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..