Open doors

 

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One door will close and another will open,

a portal to something quite new

Turning the knob is at times very daunting,

but something we all need to do

 

There is no telling the places its leading,

pathways a threshold will show

Step after step an adventure is calling,

you must decide if to go

 

There you may find in astonishing phrases,

words that are sent from afar

Flowers in vases abloom from the garden,

the light of the first morning star

 

Chambers and hallways with fine golden hardware,

paintings the walls do appear

Mahogany woodwork in arches and stairways,

curtains of lace, soft and sheer

 

Maybe a chair, overstuffed, so inviting,

offering you a nice seat

While in the vestibule, someone is waiting,

one you are destined meet

 

No matter the instance when doorways are open,

open as well, up your mind

For if you walk through as another door closes,

you might be surprised what you find

 

~

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

I've been meaning to read you for awhile now. I like this willweb. I like it a lot! An excellent first impression. As I started to read I sensed the rhythm. Asked myself, "is he counting?" The 11/7 count of odd numbers creates an even cadence that bounces nicely. Your subject takes an old idea, like opening new doors, and breathes new life into it. The poem is comfortable as an overstuffed chair, without being stuffy. Love it!

Bill

I wish I had time to read more. You just gained a fan, man! I'm comin' for you as fast as I can, and I can't wait to read what else you have in store.

Billigami

[willweb]

Wow, thanks so very much. I am glad you stopped by. I don't really count per se, I just always have some kind of rhythm or melody floating through my head. I apply what is there when I write most of the time.

[William Michael Reeves]

Is there an app for that?

[willweb]

Not sure, sometimes I think it is curse.

[John]

This is an enchanting read, reminding us why we continue to read. Not just to open our minds to new perspectives, but the opportunity to meet new people.

[willweb]

Thanks John. I appreciate you stopping by

[John the Baptist]

Nicely rhymed romantic offering here. That aside, it also teaches a valuable lesson. We must always be open to venturing into new fields. Those who fear to take a chance may stay safe, but they will also remain unfulfilled.

[willweb]

Thanks so much John. I appreciate your visit

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your poem offers up great perspective, Will. Thank you for that!

[willweb]

Thank you for your nice comment Kelly.

[Ciara]

The message in this is so meaningful and optimistic. Some people seize the moment while others regret the missed opportunities. I hope to never be one of those people.

[willweb]

Wow, it's like Deja vu. : )
Thank you, my friend, it wasn't necessary, but I appreciate it. You are very kind.

[Ciara]

It's no trouble 🙂

[DIVYA]

This poem resonates with me today. I wish to close certain doors but there is rust and resistance in their hinges. Given the beauty that awaits me on the other side of those doors, I swear I'm going to try doubly hard. Thank you for sharing this very beautiful and inspiring poem. It's very apt and timely!

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. The world is filled with opportunities that we should probably reach for if we are able.

[DIVYA]

Yes I can clearly see that.
You are welcome and have a nice day.