Same things

~

You are the glow as I crawl through the darkness,

lighting my way so these eyes they can see

A soft woolen blanket when winter is reaching,

wrapping the warmth of your arms around me

 

You are the shelter when storms fill the heavens,

keeping me dry as each raindrop does fall

A calming voice that I hear in the distance,

when every sorrow about me does call

 

You are the strength as my knees slowly weaken,

lifting me up when I’ve nothing to give

The precious life when I feel I am dying,

giving me hope when I don’t want to live

 

You are my world, every day I am facing,

showing me love is a beautiful view

All that I wish is whenever you need me,

I will be all of these same things for you

~

Reviews

[Seriana]

The last stanza is perfect and ties it all together. What a sweet little piece of sharing the things together!

[willweb]

Sometimes my heart gets ahold of my pen and things like this happen. Thrilled you liked this one Seriana.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is love wrapped up in perfect rhyme.
j.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Jacob. Glad you stopped by.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and strong words written Will.
"You are my world, every day I am facing,
showing me love is a beautiful view
All that I wish is whenever you need me,
I will be all of these same things for you"
The above lines. Something, we all need. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you once again Coyote for your kind comment

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.

[M]

A strong love is quite a comfort for the soul. One does not need to worry about anything except to make sure that we offer the same comforts in return. I appreciate your skill with rhyming verse, willweb. Lovely poem.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Makhabat

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful, tender expressions of love. What one feels from the love of another and what one hopes they can give in return. Just purrfect will.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so much Chris, I am happy you liked this.

[JD Major]

A lovingly written poem, with a touch of genius in your last two lines,
See what I mean, willweb, ditto on the review you sent to me today :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much my friend.

[Soren]

Will I felt this poem. It had a great format pairing what the person offers with what you need. Then at the end you twisted this to a wish to be all to them that they are to you. Lovely and inspiring. Nice work.

[willweb]

Thanks Soren. Glad you liked it.

[Mk.t.g]

"You are the strength as my knees slowly weaken,
lifting me up when I’ve nothing to give"

Such emotional lines! I love the constant praise you give to the significant person while highlighting your reasons. Thanks for sharing such an amazing piece of writing, Willweb!

[willweb]

Thank you so much for your nice review of my work.

[Mk.t.g]

You're welcome, Willweb!

[Dave Brown]

very nicely presented to whomever is the luck one
Hopefully she enjoys reading poetry or she may miss your praise

[willweb]

Thanks so much Dave. Glad you liked it.

[DIVYA]

This love feels so complete and comforting. "A soft woolen blanket when winter is reaching, wrapping the warmth of your arms around me"...it says everything of the tenderness and warmth shared between two souls. The promise at the conclusion of the poem completes the poem in a beautiful way. Another gem from your amazing pen, dear Willweb.

[willweb]

Thank you my sweet friend for always being so nice to me with your comments.

[DIVYA]

A very special poem of yours that was my pleasure to read.