Across symphonic skies

~

 

Echoes breath of northern fields

where rhythms form as twilights dance

Alone my love does play for you

on mystic strings of found romance

 

Neath weathered winds on sunset views

of amethyst and crimson haze

Fluorescent flows in shimmered light

to harmonize these snowfall days

 

For hear my love, eurhythmic tones

melodically our song takes flight

Concertos played of purest sound

across symphonic skies this night

 

~

Reviews

[Zoe Richardson]

I could see the Northern Lights dancing in this piece. Only in my imagination, since I've never seen them in real life. I like the crispness of the words, like a frosty evening. It almost makes me wish I believed romance existed!

[willweb]

Oh it exists...I know it does. The Northern Lights...that is something I have never seen in person but would love to someday just to make sure they exist. : ) Thank you for reading and commenting Zoe.

[Dave Brown]

the beauty of nature enhanced by music, what could be more appropriate

[willweb]

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely musicality in the flow of your lines and such wonderful poetic expression will. Stanza two my favourite. Great read with my afternoon cuppa. Thank you.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so much Chris. Happy I could make your afternoon a little sweeter.

[Ken e Bujold]

music to the eyes and ears will. eloquent and angelic.

[willweb]

Thank you Ken. Coming from one as talented as you, that means a lot to me.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

The more I read of your work the more obvious it is that you are a musician. All three things go together: love, poetry, and music. Well done!

[willweb]

Yep, I am a musician, I play many instruments but mostly piano and guitar. I am happy you enjoyed this musical journey today. Thank you for your kindness, Linda.

[Helen Crutchett]

Beautiful poem. Descriptive and calm. A joy to read.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Helena

[Coyote Poetry]

The music of the night, the music of nature. When love dances with both. A perfect harmony Will. I liked this poem. Had perfect harmony and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Thank you so much my friend. I appreciate your visit

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Will.