No need for wishing

No need for wishing

 

~

We waltzed on the moon

while the universe slumbered

Strolled through a maze at

the edge of the night

 

Stenciled a heart on

the clouds found at sunset

Painted a garden

in jasmine delight

 

Watched as the day dawned

a silken mosaic

Laid in the grass

neath a heaven sent view

 

Looked in our hearts

and found all we desired

No need for wishing,

our dreams had come true

~

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

What a lovely gentle lilting piece. Indeed dreamlike and true.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Ken

[Dave Brown]

As far as wishing is concerned, I wish I could come up with the constant stream of quality poetics that you continually present, of which this is another beautiful example.
Very nicely done "again!!!!"

[willweb]

I just write'em, I have no idea where
they come from : ) Thanks my friend.

[Soyam]

The evocative description of watching the day dawn and finding fulfillment in our hearts is truly heartwarming. Short but nice one.

[willweb]

Thank you so much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Gee]

As Christine so rightly said, beautifully written. But hey, why would we expect anything less than perfection from you :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Gee. What a nice thing to say

[Chris Shaw]

When dreams come true. Another beaut of a romantic write from your pen will. Waltzing on the moon in its silvered light is quite something. I saw the silhouettes in a slow clinch. Have a lovely Sunday.

Chris

[willweb]

Thank you so much Chris. I am happy you liked it.

[Lorry]

Life is good when feeling like that, that I can picture you singing these lyrical words, caught in the moment when everything just clicks into place and lead to the moment a smile is born, as well as problems that feel so big at other times in your life, just melt away into nothing.

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. Some days just feel that way.