An autumn masterpiece

An autumn masterpiece

 

 As fall now spins its color wheel,

a’ changing of the leaves to share

Creatively, these pleasures show,

now won’t you come and meet me there

To feel the breeze upon your skin

in wafting scents of mountain pine

So I may hold you close to me,

and know you’ll be forever mine

 

Perhaps we’ll share a tender kiss,

while walking slowly in the sun

Admiring the season’s view,

as nothing more could be such fun

 

Then spend the day in shaded bliss,

beneath a pastel maple tree

Here in the park as autumn paints,

a masterpiece for you and me

Reviews

[Lorry]

For me Will, how things look are important and autumn is a wonder all of its own, but being from a cold country I do find it difficult to get into any idea of romance, especially when I as well as whoever the she in that scenario is would look more like we are unwrapping presents that don't want unwrapped, as we fight to remove as few pieces of clothing as possible, which will only end up in the majority of cases as being labelled and classed as nothing more than a disappointing fumble.
Perhaps it's the constant muffled tutting from the other participant, as she tries to submerge herself under the many layered duvet of sense, just to avoid frostbite in extremities of course. 😊

[willweb]

I understand my friend and yes indeed, cold weather is no friend of romance unless there is a nice fire going and some hot drinks to share. But still, sub-freezing temps...nah, I'll just wait for spring.

[Coyote Poetry]

The change of color is wonderful in Michigan Will.
"Here in the park as autumn paints,
a masterpiece for you and me"
I did like the above lines my friend. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Here in South Texas. not so much color but I am from the northeast and just returned from a trip there and the autumn colors were amazing. Thanks so much again.

[Starbaby]

Nothing better than a nice walk on a crisp autumn day taking in all the colours of the season, holding hands with that someone special. You capture that feel perfectly.

[willweb]

Thank you again for your visit and your comment. I am happy you enjoyed this

[John the Baptist]

Yes, autumn is the season that paints masterpieces, like the foliage I was observing today. Perhaps the spring is more romantic, with its promise of good things ahead, but autumn has its own charms.

[willweb]

All seasons carry their own magic I think John. I appreciate your comment

[John Sullivan]

A wonderful piece. I love this time of year, foliage and pumpkin spice. Great read!

[willweb]

Thanks so much John

[Stu. T.H.]

It's so Romantic-Cute-Wholesome-Amazing and I Love It~!!

To feel the pleasant breeze and change of weathers,
To speak words to words not by exchanging letters,
To feel the scenery passes us by,
To greet a new season and say hi,
To spend the season with whom you love,
To spend nights cuddling under warm nightly cove,
That is to turn the season for solemn longing,
Into a season for warmth and loving.

Such delights are known best in Autumn, and it's shown so prominently in the work!
It's truly a real masterpiece~!
Thank you for sharing your work, author willweb! I wish you to enter the upcoming Winter in the same loving manner as this Autumn.

[willweb]

Thanks so much for your comment and gift poem. I appreciate your visit