Perfect sunrise smile

~

An orange sherbet whisper

now illuminates your eyes

In the mystic morning visions

of these frigid winter skies

While a blue bird sings a chorus

as it frolics in the trees

Upon shivered barren branches

in the chilly northern breeze

Where the dewdrops cast reflections

‘cross an emerald frosted lawn

There along a frozen pathway

leading off into the dawn

And horizons shine your praises

in an effervescent style

When this new day does awaken

to your perfect sunrise smile

~

Reviews

[Soren]

Will another of your beautifully imaged poems of brightness and hope. I think I am your alter ego Will, in that my poems take on the dark side of love and passion. Loved this one and am looking for more to come.

[Seriana]

Will! How lovely this is! I don't know if you are speaking of a sunrise or a lady in the morn. Either way, I'll imagine this as both. A lovely way to welcome in the day. The first light got me. Beautiful piece, my friend!

[Stella Armour]

This is just perfect Will, could almost paint the picture...

[John Sullivan]

Beautiful, Will. Nicely done

[Ken Simm.]

There is that song writing again. Excellent.

[Corset]

imho perfection.....................................

[Cassie]

wow wow..I honestly felt like this was written to me, it sounded like melody as i read through silently