The girl with the sunflower heart

~

She stood in the sun

facing the heavens,

a smile that could paint

the springtime anew

Spinning around

midst butterfly tickles,

her soft petal beauty

enhancing the view

Singing so sweetly

in harmonies blooming,

greeting the day

as the morning does start

Sharing her dreams

with all that is nature,

for she is the girl

with the sunflower heart

~

Reviews

[Pete]

the sunflower follows the sun. now this is clever and cool. if i could just get some of her seeds. beautiful stuff ww. you are ever the romantic.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Pete. Thanks for the cool comment

[Kim S.]

This is such a lovely write. Enjoyed the read

[willweb]

Thank you again Kim. Your kindness is appreciated.

[Soren]

So light and bright a beautiful picture of sunshine in the openness of nature. Lovely!

[willweb]

Thanks my friend. Sunshine and nature always makes for good poetry, glad you liked it.

[Neville]

Go on, make me smile why don't ya .. tis indeed luverly sir .. Neville

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. If this made you smile, then it made me smile too!

[Shraddha]

It feels so peaceful and warm.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a magical write, Will. I could picture a little girl dancing in the sunshine and singing a song she made up. Butterfly tickles....such a great thought. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Lydi**

[willweb]

Thanks so much Lydi. That is very close to the picture in my mind as I wrote this.

[Writergurl]

I really enjoyed this write, felt some sadness in this.
Amazing flow as well.

[willweb]

Thank you for your kind thoughts

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and so sad if she gives that heart to another...rather than the speaker.
j.

[willweb]

You can't win'em all! Thanks again my friend.

[John the Baptist]

What would be the characteristics of a sunflower heart? Big? Open? Hope she stays that way. I've seen some a couple of decades on who had nothing left but briars.

[willweb]

I've seen a few of those two in my days. Thanks my friend.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a lovely lyrical write Will. A poem that warms the heart. Rhymes and flows beautifully, with fine imagery.

Chris

[willweb]

Thanks so much Chris

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)