Intoxicated

Is this what it's like to be in love?

I feel so intoxicated

Almost like I am high

Like a love struck puppy

It hurts when I'm not with you

You stay in my thoughts through the day

Intoxicated by your presence

I miss you before you even leave the room

You saved me from my own prison

Turning my light into darkness

A constant smile on my face

Feeling silly and full of giggles

I have never felt so care free

As you press your lips to mine

I feel intoxicated by your love

My mind starts to wonder

Not able to think straight

I never knew I needed love so much

Opening my heart to something new

Our bodies pressed together

Wrapped in your arms

Holding hands with fingers laced

Intoxicated by your touch

Falling hard not wanting to hit the ground

The sensations feels amazing

Is this what it is like to be love struck?

Reviews

[shawnt5604]

I like it ;) ,,,,,,,,,,

[soliloquy]

Well done. I love the color. It adds to this and is perfect for these spectrum of feeling;s.

[Arthur Crow]

That definitely sounds like love on fire to me! Beautifully expressed by your pen :)

[Rob Santana]

Emotional passionate ride. I enjoyed it, well written.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you very much. xo Winter

[kublakhan27]

Wow, you really said it here. It's like you're channeling everyone who's ever been in love...you really covered all the bases in terms of what goes through one's mind in this state...perfect :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you so much. I am happy that you enjoyed it. xo Winter

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure^^ xo

[MAC]

okay Neon's review covers it all, nothing much to add other then I truly love this piece

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you! ^^ xo Winter

[Antoñyo]

(long sigh....) Commoners, feast your eyes on love's perfection!

My new favorite from the heart of Winter!! 100+

[FlatLineBeauty]

^^ heh, thanks. Glad you liked it. ;) xo Winter

[Raymond Federle]

what Neon said. Double Ditto. :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you for reading, Ray. ^^ It means a lot xo Winter

[Neon]

Opp! "WinterRose's gonna push someone's nose"! Ha!

I really loved it but i love to hear from someone as gorgeous as you that feeling like intoxicated cos, love's onself an intoxicate and those who're in love seemed addicted to the feelings of warmth .. and so on. Love's just a game and those who play it right always live happy lives and those who don't live it, never feel it and never treat love right .. they always go trapped into the trap of love-cage and start making crime and never live their lives beautifully ... Ahh ...

... forget those bad people... just enjoy the time with good one's and treat love right.. treat women right and vice-versa... because hot men's just as same as me always love seeing someone as beautiful and stunning as you feel Happy and damn smiley all the day and nights because to live the life, to to feel the warmth of love .. of someone everybody should treat everyone right...

... and those who're in love they should enjoy the nights of lives :)

To me, this write's rating goes to 100/100 .. A wonderful write, splendid designed with rainbow colors.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you, Neon. Your kind words and review are appreciated. Happy you are seeing more than one side to me. xo Winter

[Neon]

My pleasure, you pretty Rose!
Well... i often love seeing more than one side to someone especially when the someone's damn beautiful just as same as you.

[FlatLineBeauty]

You are far to flattering. Thank you again

[4$H]

This is amazing! I love the way you have used to colored font.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Thank you ^^ im glad you liked it xo Winter