We were something beautiful

We were something beautiful
In an ugly world
The day i saw you
I knew you were my girl
We had more time than most get
You helped me learn, helped me to forget
The blue eyes that saw right through me
The moment we kissed you knew me
All it takes is one glance
They fit so perfectly, our hands
I only got one chance to make you mine
But obviously it wasnt the right time
You let me go---
Our love is all we have to show
For the beauty we managed to grow
(Nlr)

Reviews

[annabellee]

"We were something beautiful
In an ugly world"
loved these lines and the whole poem.
great write :)

[Nicole]

Yeahh. Those 2 lines to me speak it all. For the longest time i couldnt finish it because nothing seemed good enough for those lines.
Thank you tho!:) glad you liked it

[annabellee]

you are most welcome :)

[zainul]

A cute piece packed with exciting amorous stories.

[Nicole]

Well thank you.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.