I luv rain...

this poem shows how i love to enjoy the rain

A beauteous rainy morning,

me with my umbrella

rambling the streets all alone

umpteen rain droplets clasp 

the earth, every here and now

some clash into the splash

& I LOVE IT.

They try to douse me

& giggle as they do,

they soak me

but I LOVE IT.

cold breeze touches me like a feather, 

flurry stresses to swoop my umbrella

& all chuckle as it do,

now I am unshielded,

all watery,

& I LOVE IT.

I m splashed out, 

I throw my hands in the air, 

I close my eyes,

and I feel the rain,

I listen to the bits..

& I LOVE IT

Author's Note

its my first poem ever...please tell how it is

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Lovely landscape cool atmosphere nice poem.

[Lily Mae]

I like it and rain so it's perfect to me;) xx

[Priyanka Natesh]

Very emotional Pramod! Good start. There are minor errors like capitalizing the "I" 's.
Good luck :)

[sushi]

I too love it........

Its a great read.....

Thanks for sharing....

[Akshat♥]

I love rain so much:)
smell ..great feeling ..i loved your first write..
Keep writing:)

[Tasha]

For your first poem you did a great job. I love the rain too. Wonderful write, keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[brenda]

i love it ! lol me too agree with you how you love rain i love it too !!:) wonderful poem !:)

[Sakib]

I also love rain. Sometime rain creates hazards though. You have expressed your feelings nicely. This is really a good start. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.