Spring

A short poem about the coming of Spring

There's a chill in the air, but a warmth in the breeze
There are buds, there are blossoms. There are butterflies, bees.

There's the bright, lively song of the birds as they sing.
As they fly, hear them cry their sweet tidings of spring!

Life bursts up all around as it begins anew.
A fresh start, a new hope
These hard times are through!

Spring is finally arriving as winter departs.
Join in the song; embrace joy in your heart!

Reviews

[Legolas]

Ah, this really feels like the beginning of spring. The time where there is still coolness in the air but warmth is coming. And of course, the start of new life!! Its so wonderful. I love this poem! This reminds me of a song called "Springtime" by Yiruma. Its a very pretty song and I can almost play it. Listen to it if you get the chance:)

[Vandana Sharma]

Such a beauty in spring and we all will dip i nit.

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thank you!!

[Nath]

A very good poem about pring, I particularly like the third stanza where you characterize spring as the time after the harsh winter, when life was absent to start again and let on that even the unfriendliest environment can't prevent that a fresh start is made.
The examples you give - buds, blossoms, butterflies, bees - are classical, and I like the alliterative enumeration.
Well written!

[Condor]

You have wonderful rhythm in your words and I do love how you enchnted us with your spring message here. (Damned I wish we had spellcheck here, cause I keep making booboos). It is just the start of Autumn here but I cannot wait until the spring with all the new life coming around. This was a delight and another wonderful read. Thank you once again.

[ThomasHinyard]

*rightfully noted*
Since today we set the clocks forward, I declare this to be the beginning my own spring. lol.

After reading this poem, I've noticed that you really have a grounded style of writing. You like to be brief. I like it. You're really strong on your imagery. It's really good for the reader to be able to see what you have written and I have always been a vision kind of person. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for Spring. The first warm days of Spring allow us to wish for more warm day and the feel of the sun upon our faces. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lion of Judah]

I love your flow. Beautiful