Taking Chances

Have you yet dared to dream?

Have you eyed the sky

Or spared barely a glance?


Have you reached for the stars,

Have you taken a chance?


Have you looked towards the sun?

Have you reached for the sky?


Or do you lie, watching clouds

As life passes you by?


Have you ever wondered:

Is life all it seems?


Don't you want to be more?

Haven't you dared to dream?


Have you taken a chance?

Don't you want to go far?


Reach out to the sky

Because you might catch a star.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow this is good, we never want to leave the comfort zone or take the extra mile always betting small. sometimes we have take a chance in order to get ahead.
Excellent write

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thank you!! Glad you liked this :)

[annabellee]

"Reach out to the sky
Because you might catch a star. "
I absolutley adored these lines, so gorgeous.
I can totally relate, your poem really spoke to me.
Well done :)

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[justthatgirl34]

Very good. I personally prefer more complex poems with underlying meaning in each section but this is very good.

[❀ Gabriela ❀]

Thanks!

[Legolas]

Loved it!! Taking chances is all something we all should do

[BLACK PRINCE]

AMAZING !!!

[BLACK PRINCE]

You are amzing.
This poem is optimistic in concept.
This poem can encourage the lazy in spirit.
This poem can make somebody question their life, saying
WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING WITH MY LIFE?

good poem

[Archia]

I loved the meaning in this it was great. The rhyme was really nice, it made it a lot easier to read and had a nice flow. Also the last line was great, it just ended it with a satisfying tone. So, I really enjoyed this poem.

[Wolfwind]

A wonderful work of ink! Nice tempo and positivity. A fun read the brings a bit of hope in the night sky, as long as one has safety gloves so their hands don't get burned on the star they catch! =)

Nice ink!
Aaron

[LonelySoul]

A nice light read to caress my eye,yes I dare to touch the sky,I'd love to tell you all I've seen,if only,you could enter my dream,then you'd understand just what I mean...would many a tear fall from my eye,if I never tried oi touch the sky...

[MOON]

Yup, dare to dream lovely flow to the poem.