If I told you

If I told you a secret

 

Would you give it away?

 

Would you make me regret

 

Every word that I'd say?

 

 

If I told you a secret

 

Could you keep it inside?

 

Or is your promise to keep it

 

Nothing more than a lie?

 

 

If I told you a secret,

 

Counting on what you say-

 

Could I trust you to keep it,

 

Or would you give it away?

 

 

If I tell you a secret,

 

Promise never to part

 

With these innermost thoughts;

 

The words from my heart.

Reviews

[Legolas]

Great job!!! The rhyming is superb!!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written and expressed.

[closed..acct]

Wow i know the feeling here,
So well expressed as well.
Love the flow & amazing rhyme scheme as well.
Awesome!