It Hurts

I just made the biggest mistake,

we were so happy when I hadn't told him

but I love him and I can't keep secrets from him,

it hurts too much,

I want to die, I want to cry until I have no water left in my body.

I want to disappear 'cause it just hurts too much.

I'm an idiot, I know that, I shouldn't have fallen in love.

~

Love ends in two different way, 1. You live happily ever after with the person you love or

2. The relationship ends in unhappy tears and in broken hearts.

Author's Note

I hope you like this little poem :)

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Perfect observations... There is two possible results in declaring our love to the other person, one is that they might accept it and feel our love and the second one they walk away... The first one is happiest feeling and the second one is the hardest... A very well written work with a very heartfelt message... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Rainy]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it :)

[ManasaC]

As truthful and honest it can get. Simple yet powerful. Good Job. I loved it!

[Rainy]

thank you, thank you, thank you!! I'm very happy that you liked it! :D

[Schatzi]

Hello Rainy,

Straight to the point! I'm sure everyone can relate to your poem one way or the other. Love is a tricky thing but well worth it if you find it. Good poem, I like it.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[Rainy]

Thank youuuuu!! I'm so happy that you liked it!

[Karmee]

You know what this is such a truthful write,
Enjoyed this, It's sincere & straight forward.
Very awesome write

[Rainy]

omg thank you so much, I'm very happy that you liked it! xD