Colors

Life was a cool blue that turned stagnate

Green was the color, that of moss

That mossy green then caught a flame

And life was burning an incandescent red

That fire burned too bright

And it collapsed quite quickly

To turn into darkness as black as ash

Reviews

[Taino]

The cyclic motions of life and its emotions, awesome imagery.

[Andromeda.]

Vivid, emotive. I adore the symbolism and how gracefully you weaved it. The ending disturbs my soul... -L

[Wolf Towne]

Thank you, I'm glad I aroused emotion in you.

[Kevin Waken]

Really cool, the concept of the poem, i like it.

[Wolf Towne]

Thank you for your kind words.