Ponder

World is what?

Earth touching feet, minds soaring through the skies, pondering what is the world? What will become of this world?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Quinn W]

Really thought-provoking. I feel as if this could be one of those journal entry things where they give you a new topic to write about every day that's supposed to clear your mind. I often do them because people say it helps with anxiety (it doesn't but they're still fun to do sometimes). I loved how you said "Earth touching feet' and "Minds stating through the skies." I love how they come together. They fit well.Loved it!

[Starr]

Thank you so much! And ya, my teacher used to make me write those all the time.

[Chrys Marie]

I love the way this piece made me think. Also, the imagery is excellent - it's wonderful how I can have a vivid picture in my mind from just the few words you've written. Nice work!

[Starr]

Thank you so much! I have others like this as well.

[GalaxyGhost]

It questions the world and I like that point. Question everything!

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[TheOne&Only]

Love the questions!! I think one day this world will become what it was always meant to be! And I tell you right now, It was meant to be 'Better' than it is today... :)

[Starr]

Thank you so much! I have more like these too! And i do agree

[William Liston]

Another thought-provoking piece. I like how the imagery occurs almost at random, yet it seems to make perfect sense. In other words, I usually don't associate "Earth touching feet" with "minds soaring through the skies" but the two used together in this poem really works well. The last question sums it all up because it introduces a question that can be conveyed by reading the previous parts of the poem. Well done.

-William Liston

[Starr]

Thank You so much!