Alive...

Alive or Not

I feel more alive in my own dreams, when I'm dying on the outside...

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

You can bring life to the dying self with dreams, if you believe in them. This shows how hard it is to live a life on the outside that is not in alignment with our dreams. And how easy it is to retract to dreams, without manifesting the, if the dying self cannot bring them to the surface to be trypuly lived. Thank you for a thought-provoking writing.

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[zunie frost]

dream are really beautiful one feel free from everything from outside !!!
great work .your words are perfectly chosen

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[p]

You know this poem would probably resound really well with someone who has the condition that causes them to stop breathing when they're asleep, but that's in the strictest literal sense. My take on this one is that it feels better to pretend when life gets depressing.

Well done for a single sentence.

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yes. Dreams are always good unless it becomes a nightmare. ;)
I love to dream and I dream of things I wanna achieve.

Keep Writing. Love it.

[Starr]

Thanks so much! And same here...