Death Comes With A Price

I dare you..?

Bright eyes dare to invade your soul, you look away, and your breaths become shallow. Do you wish to play with Death?

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

An interesting piece- so many images come to mind- looking into the eyes of death rather than looking away- is this playing with death? At first I thought it was about someone piercingly looking into the poet's soul, the eyes looking away in fear and panick, but a strong voice raising up to back the one off- "do you wish to play with death?" A veiled warning not to intrude. Then my perspective changed reading it as death trying to look into the poet's soul- again the fear of confrontation- don't look death in the eye, there will be a cost of you challenge death. Then it was from the perspective of a thrill seeker- one who defies death- a warming to them not to provoke death, for there will be a cost. So many ways to read this, it makes it a provocative and interesting read. Thank you.

[Starr]

Wow! That is amazing, Thank you so much!

[zunie frost]

true saying . i also wrote a poem about death that it come unexpected all of a sudden .
your poem is short but it's worth reading

[Starr]

Thanks so much for another review!

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!

[iamshadowine]

this is great! it gave me the accuracy to think about those pretty amazing lines!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[Quinn W]

Ooooh kinda creepy. Cool. I like it but there is a grammatically error. Besides that, I absolutely loved it!

[Starr]

Thanks for the review