Disgrace

Nothing more left...

Look at that pale moon, you see it's shining bright, and I'm over here dull as a firefly. 

Author's Note

So... What y'all think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of opposites. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you Starr for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

Thanks and no problem! It is what I do.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Marianne Rose]

I like it- you have a way of capturing an emotion and a visual picture using very few words. A firefly may not be as bright as the moon, but it is filled with such mystery and agility for a small creature. Delightful but deep read. Thank you!

[Starr]

Thanks you so much for this! I really appreciate it!

[Quinn W]

I feel like this speaks to many people. Thinking that they aren't as good as others. I really like the metaphor you used. Really great!

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I appreciate this review!

[p]

I like it, and as I always do when I review poetry, I have to give my interpretation.

I'm going to take wild stab in the dark and say that this is a metaphor for being outshone by one's peers.

All the same, it's very well put together.

[Starr]

Thank you so much!

[iamshadowine]

this is so good!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[zunie frost]

wow !!! great work
keep writing more !!!

[Starr]

I have wrote for years on end and have no intentions on stopping. Thanks so much!

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!