Greeting Death

Gone....Take Me

Dear Death... I'm Ready...Take Me

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Short & to the point. That works

[Starr]

Thanks so much for the review!

[Chrys Marie]

A good example of short poetry. A nice story told in such a few words. Nice work.

[Starr]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I liked the old words. "Death come when death desire." It is good to be ready for death. Few shall welcome death. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Starr]

Thanks so much! Always..

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Starr.

[Jay Bailey]

more. needs more. not enough content. i know its poetry, but goddammit, more!

[Starr]

Pushy aren't we... I love writing these short ones because they force you to think. Thanks lol

[Jay Bailey]

yea, i tend to be. please understand that i mean it to be pushy in a good way. i think you have talent, and its probably just my opinion but im always left wanting with short writing and it leaves me going "what the hell." no offense meant. keep up the good work.

[Starr]

Thanks so much and i understand lol, i get how readers are. Want something interesting.. check out my book I am writing... it is not complete but so far I think it is well, 63 pages to keep you interested for a bit... https://www.quotev.com/story/7567520/Ashes-of-Mercy

I have another Stolen Moonlight too, another book I am writing, check it out too.

[Starr]

Thanks so much and i understand lol, i get how readers are. Want something interesting.. check out my book I am writing... it is not complete but so far I think it is well, 63 pages to keep you interested for a bit... https://www.quotev.com/story/7567520/Ashes-of-Mercy

I have another Stolen Moonlight too, another book I am writing, check it out too.

[p]

I do like when pauses are implemented in writing. I always take it to mean hesitance. Like here, the pauses by my interpretation would show that the person isn't ready for death at all.

Well done.

[Starr]

Ohhh, well Thanks For the Review!

[Shy Joe]

Reminds me of the song "One" by Metallica. The picture I drew in my head was of sick person that was terminal and unable to enjoy life anymore.

[Starr]

Yea I know... And Thanks for reading! I have depression and anxiety and sometimes...it gets really rough on me. Thanks Again!