Strong

Tell me...

Hold onto me

I'm holding on to you

Don't let me go

I need you

Don't let me sink

I'm holding on

Don't let me go

I love you

Say it too

You know you mean it

Or do you

I don't mind

I'm holding on

Hold onto me

I will hold onto you

I love you

Don't let me go

I won't let you go

I Love You

Author's Note

What do y'all think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words for love. A amazing poem dear friend.
Coyote

[Writtenments]

Very simple and enjoyable piece. As LM stated, great lyrics for a hit song!

[Starr]

Awe thanks so much! I have been writing poems like this and somehow they end up like lyrics. Thanks again, I may write a song now.

[Writtenments]

There you go :)

[LM]

This is very pretty and very simple too! I think you've got great lyrics for a hit song. Love it!

[Starr]

I always go for simple. Thanks, and yes I may write a song too!

[Tessah]

It's amazing, I love it! Especially the colors.

[Starr]

Thanks! I am glad you like it. I love the colors too

[zunie frost]

Beautiful piece of work .!!
Great job

[Starr]

Thanks so much! I am glad you like (love) it

[iamshadowine]

such a cute poem! love, trust and faith, they aren't only meant to be words, but more than that! :)
excellent write!
keep writing :D

[Starr]

Thanks so much! And I never will stop writing.

[p]

I probably would've called the poem "I Love You." but other than that I thought this was quite pleasant.

[Starr]

Thanks so much!