Mysterious Moon

They are waiting

Watching us

Whispering of our journey

Upon the distant shores of a dream

 

They see and know everything

Our soul and spirit are unveiled

Our desires, shine like lights to them

Our sparks, a scent they can’t resist

 

Luna’s light is a traitor to our secrets

Her love was theirs, long before I was ours

She will side with her first embraced

When the day comes for the two legged to vanish

 

We hear them

Their ghost like howls

Growls upon the breeze

Of a midnight’s heart beat

 

They are many

While we are yet still few

Upon the crystal blue waters

Of this world new

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

If I didn't see that "two legged to vanish" part...I would've said that this sounds like the wandering souls of those which are unsettled.. moaning from trails they have endured...tortured cries from the wretched. Hollowed beings lost from the living. (must be the time of year...dunno) This is such a thought provoking piece for me. I know the wolves are calling but...I still think of ghosts. :)

[quinfinn]

i see this from the viewpoint of wolves, personally and i like that very much. i am an advocate of the wolf and have posted several poems about them. this is a monumental piece, written with flair and finesse.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! The Wolf has always been a powerful totem for me, both as a guide and as a source of wisdom. Thanks for sharing your view of the piece. It's much appreciated.

[Riley Mistwood]

Wonderful poem. I enjoyed the read

[Lily Mae]

I can't tell you how much you are making my heart and soul smile.. Luna holds the secrets of the past as she will covet the ones that are still before us. I love the dark mysterious sense to this..
"We hear them
Their ghost like howls
Growls upon the breeze
Of a midnight’s heart beat"

Love Love Love it...xo oh and the pic looks vaguely familiar lol ;)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nice word play, loved the imagery. Beautiful!

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! =)