Oh Beloved

A romantic poem

Oh beloved,

Your words are a heaven embraced

They breathe life into this cherished smile

Forever stirring my heart to beat bright with joyous warmth

Look now, surely you see the glow

Reflections of pink and red upon diamond rose petals

Ever sailing upon the winds between you and I.

 

Oh beloved,

May I forever hear your kind and gentle voice

It is a sweet song that makes my soul tremble

With the vibrant love of a perfect rainbow

It is a light that sparks my inner spirit a flame

Setting my own song to weave within the star’s light

So that it falls gently, lovingly, into your precious eyes.

 

Reviews

[Muse]

Oh what a lovely tribute. I sincerely hope that he/she reads you and knows who inspired this. Loving somebody this much...we see them in the fresh green grass...the wind in the air...we hear their names spoken in every famous love song. Allowing them to infiltrate our very core of life, we breathe them....we feel their essence in our bones. Loved the pic, and thank you for the "fuzzy-feel-good" superb poetry!

[Wolfwind]

Thank you! I really appreciate your comment.

[Muse]

of course! :))

[Megara]

this is beautiful in every way i can think of!
amazing:)

[Wolfwind]

Many thanks! =)

[Shy Girl]

Oh Wolfie...you already know what I think of this beautiful piece. You already know what it is that I hear when reading this piece. You already know what it is I feel when I read this piece. So the only thing left to convey is this, "'twas always the return that made her smile" =)

[Wolfwind]

=) I'm glad! Many thanks for your review!

[Shy Girl]

You don't ever have to thank me...I thank you for sharing :)

[Admiral Kirk]

Awww, that's so sweet!!! It's like feathers of shininess and purple raindrops and RAINBOWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDD

[Helen Woodward]

My Goodness, you have always had a romantic pen, but you seem to be cruising on a feathered breeze of wonderful phrasing that will always leave your reader with little breath...wonderful poetry hun, always a pleasure to read.
Blessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Helen xxooxx

[Wolfwind]

Thanks! Sometimes I find just the right magic to make my ink flow out hearts. =)

[DogDrawler]

I have to say, you truly know how to win a girl's heart. Reminds me of me and Megara.

[Wolfwind]

Thank you!

[Megara]

i heard that:)

[PurpleQuartz]

Beautifully romantic and filled with love! Great write!!

[Wolfwind]

Thanks for your comment! It's much appreciated. =)